Once upon a time there was a two girls who were twins. They were both eight. One of the girls name was Jade Walker and the others name was Lily Walker. One day the twins were walking though their backyard they saw the bushes moving, “Lily! I just saw that bush move! Let’s go have a look.” Said Jade “ ok but I don’t wanna look.” Replied Lily. “ ok fine but if it’s cool I’m gonna show you” said Jade. Jade tip toed into the garden avoiding the plants and peeped around the bush. “ OMG! It’s sooo cute !! Lily you have to see this! ” Said Jade. Lily, who was behind Jade stepped into the garden and saw Jade patting a tiny little grey kitten, “ that is so cute! Let’s see, does this one have a collar?” Said Lily.“Let me have a look, but if it doesn’t we’ll ask mum she can make a missing poster” said Jade. Jade look underneath the kittens chin and saw a collar that said Kina. “ There’s a name but no address, come on Lily let’s go find mum and see if she can make a missing poster and also the name of it is Kina” said Jade holding her sisters hand and skipping into their house to find their mother. “ mother where are you!” Said Jade and Lily together. “ here in the kitchen girls!” cried a happy voice. The girls ran into the kitchen calling out “ mother! mother! We find a kitten in our back-” but before they could finish their sentence their mother interrupted them “ slow down girls what are you talking about you... fond a kitten your saying?” said Mrs Walker. “ well we will tell you the whole story” said Lily and the two told their mother everything. “ um... you two want me to make a missing poster for um... what’s the kitten’s name again?” Said Mrs Walker.“ it’s Kina mum! Hold it right there, we forgot about bringing Kina inside!” Cried Jade running to their backyard. Seeing Kina shivering with cold, the two brought a blanket and rapped the poor kitten with it. After that their Mrs Walker made a missing poster for Kina, it read: Missing do you own this cute little kitten it was fond on first of January at 12:00 if you are the owner ring 0984974890.
The next day the twins woke up bright and early to go around the town to put up the missing posters. “Wow mum that is a LOT of posters you made there” said Jade looking at a pile of missing posters“Yep. There’s about 47 posters” replied Mrs Walker “Ok girls we are driving around town and putting up posters about Kina now chop chop get your shoes on and get in the car in the car you to we have work to do!” The put Kina in a cage and hoped into the car. They put up posters everywhere they even put some on some cars! After a long day putting up posters they had finally finished. The girls were very tired and went to bed in the morning they were waiting for the phone to ring. They stayed beside the phone for almost an hour then it finally rang, Lily picked up the phone first and said “ hello this is Miss Walker speaking here” Jade heard the person on the phone saying “ I am looking for my kitten who is grey and her name is Kina when saw that picture on the poster I New it was her so is that picture on the poster really Kina?” “ well your in luck we have your missing kitten, we will need your address so we can deliver it to you!” The man said his address and the girls ran to their mother and said everything they heard on the phone. “ well, we must deliver her to her real home so you two go and say goodbye to her in the car cause we’re going to bring her to her home!” The twins got in the car and said their goodbyes and delivered Kina to her home and they all lived happily ever after
THE END!
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Sunday, January 5, 2020
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Kia ora Polly,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity - keep up the good work. Don’t forget to comment back to blog commenters as well as on others SLJ blog posts to gain extra points.
What a descriptive story you have written. It made it really easy to see the story play out in my mind. I am so glad that Jade and Lily found the little kitten and brought it inside so it was safe. Making posters so that the kitten could be reunited with its owner was a really kind thing to do. This story makes it sound like you have been in this situation, have you found a missing kitten at your house before?
Until next time, happy blogging :)
Emma
Hi Emma!
DeleteI know its ben a LONG time since i the SLJ but i thought id just reply any way.
thank you so much for your comment!
No I have never found a lost kitten before, but it wpould be cool to find one! and if i do, i will know what to do because i wrote a story about it!
i hope i will do the SLJ again soon!